Plumtree

Eliot - well done for posting the digipak and poster. The front and back covers of the digipak link really well and the colouring keeps the theme of your remastering of the album. The back cover is a bit blocky and the bar code and photograph do tend to stand out from the background a little too much. The bar code could be smaller and probably at the bottom of the panel, whilst the track listing could maybe be bigger and not so far over towards the left. Is there a music company logo you could add?
Interior panel 2 doesn't really work and it lacks the continuity of the other three, being a colour photograph that just looks too modern. Have a play with this so that it has a better link to the others.
Similarly, your poster just looks too modern and doesn't really link to the digipak. It also had 'remastered' under the album title and this is not on the album cover - should it be?
Have a think about these, make some changes and repost.

Poster- First Draft

One Of These Nights- Rough Cut

http://dai.ly/x6f58es

This is my almost completed video, notes on it:

- Black and White concert shots still being experimented with
- One Clip missing (On friends SD Card)

Digipaks

Still have some tweaks to make in regards to a rusty border and colour grading of the photo and adding  'remastered'  



The back cover could do with some more creativity but this is the overall idea.




Inside Panel (Where the CD goes)



inside panel p2

Jones/Plumtree

Hi Miss/Sir,

apologies for the late submission, I will submit it all shortly but cannot do it in the correct format until I am in Sixth form due to not having PowerPoint on my Laptop,

thanks,

Eliot

Plumtree

Eliot - I was expecting to see at least first drafts of your digipak and poster/website and I am disappointed that neither have been submitted. I understand you have been having trouble uploading the video but the ancillaries need to be posted as a matter of urgency.